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Not really a lot to say after that last review, but just thought I'd say; good job! This was great. It's bad that it actually happened, of course, but as ...

A being in Tolkien's legendarium of far greater power and evil than Sauron, Morgoth, is supposed to be Tolkien's equivalent of Satan, so it could be argued, therefore, that the ...

I really liked this. I'm assuming that when you say "foreign" you mean "strange" or "unfamiliar"? If you are using it to mean "possible", then I would suggest doing as ...

I liked this, though if I'm brutally honest I wouldn't consider it to be exceptional. The reason for that is there aren't many good things I actually feel like commenting ...

I quite liked this - don't worry about the lack of rhymes, a poem doesn't need to rhyme. The lack of punctuation might hurt some people's fweelings. Personally, I didn't ...

There's something very special about this poem. I don't know what, maybe it's the slight abstractness of it, maybe it's the fact that it's on a huge level (if taken ...

Welcome to YWS! Firstly, it's worth saying that love poems are very common on YWS, so it's difficult to post one here and get an excellent review. Many people here ...

I quite liked this poem, but I wasn't sure what to make of the structure. It seemed a bit all over the place - which doesn't have to be a ...

Well that's......different. It's comical, yet still tragic enough to make me feel sorry for this fishophiliac (is that an okay alternative spelling?). It's also somewhat horrifying. However, I have to

Knowing that this wasn't written with any purpose other than to express yourself, I like this poem. I don't get much from it, though, but I like the comparisons between ...

I'm an Atheist, and I liked this poem. Admittedly, it is making me want to go on a rant in defence of my Atheism (probably not your intention), though I ...

I reality like this poem, though I'm not sure if my interpretation of it is correct. Am I right in thinking it's describing the last few moments of a time ...

This was good-as far as I'm concerned, you can't go wrong with poetry anyway. But you said you're looking for advice, and nine people so far seem to have ignored ...

I have to say, I'm quite impressed-are you really 13?! This looks more like something someone my age would write! A couple of small things to do with convention-generally, punctuation ...

I think you should ignore mike's comment on the place names. I'm guessing a large number of Indians know about Gondwanaland, the Monazite desert and Kerala? If that is the ...